The poem I wrote for my Boyfriend

ok this is a better one i wrote plz post a comment and tell me what you think

His hair shines Brown on the baby blue sky
While his beautiful brown eyes stay locked on mine
A kisss on my cheek as gentle as wind
Sends butterfly's zooming
I never want it to end

I grab his hand and hold on tight
As we fly through the forest faster then light
We stop in the middle next to a beautiful tree
and at this moment we feel happy and free

Until the time comes when we must say our goodbyes
and as he is leaving a tear escapes my eye's
But i dont let it bug me for i know for a fact
He'll be back soon and then i'll be in his lap

I think this one turned out better then the last one. comment and let me know wut you think